I will fold myself eight times in, then eight times further inward. You will not see, you will not find me. Imploding under the weight of time, past layering upon present.

This flatness makes a pretty shape, if you know how to twist it right. Turn too hard and everything smashes together: exhausted, brilliant, numbered in days.

Posted by Hg on Friday 26 September 2008 at 21:43.
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Very interesting series, man.

Don't forget that we're soliciting for contributions to the next qarrtsiluni issue, "Journaling the Apocalypse," through Oct. 6.

Comment by Dave on Friday 26 September 2008 at 22:37.

Thanks Dave. Yeah, I haven't forgotten. Haven't had the words, what with being dead and all that. I'll pull some thoughts together - maybe along the lines we discussed previously, maybe not.

Comment by Hg on Friday 26 September 2008 at 23:02.

You were dead? Why didn't anyone tell me? ;)

I like this series a lot. It feels like introspection in outer space - two of my favourite things.

Comment by Ani on Saturday 27 September 2008 at 12:52.

"Introspection in outer space" - I like it. Very apt; not my conscious intention, but that's indeed what it's like. I might have to borrow that phrase.

Comment by Hg on Sunday 28 September 2008 at 01:12.

Echo.

Comment by Daniel Black on Tuesday 30 September 2008 at 03:56.

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